SAT作文范文习作修改

SAT作文的备考过程中，参考一下SAT作文范文是非常有效率的方法，因为这可以让大家更快的`了解SAT作文写作的特点和模式。下面为大家整理了一篇SAT作文范文的修改，供大家参考。

　　SAT作文范文习作修改1

Truth is not objective

Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and assignment below:

Akira Kurosawas film masterpiece Rashomon portrays several people who have witnessed a death. As each observer recounts the event as he or she witnessed it, we come to realize that each persons story varies greatly from every other account. Watching the movie, we reflect that the truth of an experienceand perhaps all truthis different for each person.

Assignment: What is your opinion of the claim that truth is not objective, but rather is determined by each individual? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.

第一段

Great confidence is often put into what people see or hear. In a court, a judge will listen to witnesses and regard their words as evidence. However, is it possible that what we take in by eyes or ears, in another word, what we regard as truth, are not objective?

　　SAT作文范文习作修改2

Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and assignment below.

In seeking truth you have to get both sides of a story.

- Walter Cronkite

Assignment: Do you agree with Walter Cronkite that its necessary to see both sides of an issue in order to discover the truth? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experiences, or observations).

习作修改

学生习作(第一段)

语言修改

People often focus mostly on the advantageous side when they make a decision. Thus they often neglect the other side of the decision, which may lead to an unpleasant end. My family was also not able to avoid this kind of regrettable experience. From that failure, we should see both sides of an issue.

Most often when people make a decision they focus on the advantages. Thus they often neglect the other side of the decision, which may lead to an unpleasant end. My family was also not able to avoid this kind of regrettable experience. From that failure, we should see both sides of an issue.

　　SAT作文范文习作修改3

Some failed experiences are useful for us.

第一部分：

Take myself for as an example. I played tennis at the age of eight. When I was eleven years old, I took part in a Sports Meeting about tennis which was organized by Jiangsu Province, a province in the southeast of China. 1At the beginning of the group match I had won two opponents, but my third opponent, Hu, who was in the Jiangsu 2provinciances team, defeated me. The score was 1:6 and 2:6. At the end of our match, he held out his thumb to the ground and said, Loser! You cannot win forever!

I could not forget it after the match, though I would have another doubles match the next day.

分析：

the first group stage

incial team 省队

第二部分：

1 His words reverberated unceasingly nearby my ear, even in mine next day, I could not focus on the match. At the beginning of the match, the score was 1:4.

2 What are you doing? My partner shouted at me while his hand knocked at my head and his arm winded around my shoulder. You shouldnt pay attention to your failure that was something in the past. And you must focus on this match now! He shouted. At last, we won the match and got the prize of 6th that year.